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Thunderstorm by ~mangocheesecake:iconmangocheesecake:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Song


Look at me
I can't see your face through the clouds

What you see is what you get
I can't be your raincloud

Well, who likes the rain anyway?

Come as you are
Rain on me
Come crashing down
My beautiful thunderstorm

Tell me
What really matters most to you

Compromise is not a word that I'd use lightly
At least not to you

Well, who likes the rain anyway?

Come as you are
Rain on me
Come crashing down
My beautiful thunderstorm

Tell me that you love me
You'll hold me forever
Thunder and lightning
Won't hold me back, not ever

Come as you are
Rain on me
Come crashing down
My beautiful thunderstorm

Well, who likes the rain anyway?
©2009 ~mangocheesecake
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Author's Comments

I actually hate writing verse lyrics. I have a million and one choruses in a lyrics book that never get verses because I don't like writing them.

Anyway, I was inspired by my lack of thunderstorms. And also my guitar teacher was telling me I should just chuck a load of random chords together and make a really odd song, so this has about four different keys in it. :D It does actually sound all right, despite lots of key changes between chorus lines and other stuff and OK I'll shut up. :D

Also I went to the Southampton university open day today. Didn't like it as much as Exeter, but my mum spent as much time as possible trying to convince me to go to Southampton cause she went there. D'aw. How cute.

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~ixibagel Jul 3, 2009, 1:03:58 PM
did you come up with anything during the supreme boredom yesterday??

and cambridge is so pretttyyyy i might actually consider going :)

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*You're just the perfect man, no feet, no head, no hands . . . Can't you see? That's where we'll end the confusion*
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~mangocheesecake Jul 3, 2009, 10:17:38 PM
LOL, nah, I just drew....

Well, good luck with getting in, and NO SUICIDE KAYS.

--
My heart needs somebody to love, stuck in Cydonia with Sugar, who's going down, giving thanks for the venom at the twilight of the innocents.
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~sleepyfaerie Jul 4, 2009, 4:41:36 AM
oooh... I like the lyrics, and I want to hear the crazy key changes.
My friend once told me to just randomly retune my guitar and find odd chords that sound alright... I really should try it; though as the son of my music teacher it probably works better for him than it does for me =]

--
Consider this as a gift as you taste him on your lips
And he's making you scream with his hands on your hips
I hope he's leaving you empty baby this is just a fix
For such a simple little whore

When I Get Home You're So Dead
Mayday Parade
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~mangocheesecake Jul 4, 2009, 7:21:59 AM
I'll record it soon. :D They're kinda weird.

Yeah, my guitar teacher tells me to do that, but it never sounds any good when I do it. He wrote this beautiful song in a REALLY weird tuning... can't remember what it was...

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My heart needs somebody to love, stuck in Cydonia with Sugar, who's going down, giving thanks for the venom at the twilight of the innocents.
:iconixibagel:
~ixibagel Jul 4, 2009, 11:53:48 AM
definitely no suicide - far too much partying going on there for that!!

they all seem really nice there =D

--
*You're just the perfect man, no feet, no head, no hands . . . Can't you see? That's where we'll end the confusion*
:iconmangocheesecake:
~mangocheesecake Jul 4, 2009, 12:59:11 PM
THAT'S BECAUSE THEY'RE ALL BRAINWASHED GEEKS WHO NEVER GO OUT!!!

Or something of the like. :D

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My heart needs somebody to love, stuck in Cydonia with Sugar, who's going down, giving thanks for the venom at the twilight of the innocents.
:iconsleepyfaerie:
~sleepyfaerie Jul 5, 2009, 1:51:51 AM
Damn stupidly amazing musical people

--
Consider this as a gift as you taste him on your lips
And he's making you scream with his hands on your hips
I hope he's leaving you empty baby this is just a fix
For such a simple little whore

When I Get Home You're So Dead
Mayday Parade
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~LolaColaRolaRaven Jul 5, 2009, 1:05:13 PM
GO EXETER. Becaue apparently it's good for Psychology which is what I want to do XD So my mum was like OH YOU CAN GO EXETER :)

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Like sunsets on a summer night,
That flood my room,
Drowning me in beautiful light,
Just the way you would have wanted it.
You would have called me pretty things,
But you're not here,
And I'm not beautiful enough for the sunlight to speak pretty words.
:iconixibagel:
~ixibagel Jul 5, 2009, 1:05:56 PM
lol theres a nightclub in the basement at one of the colleges :)

i want to go to that one if i go, it seems the nicest haha

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*You're just the perfect man, no feet, no head, no hands . . . Can't you see? That's where we'll end the confusion*
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